The Toilet sucked and sucked,
Sucked so hard it drew blood,
Sucked and sucked so strong and long
It sucked itself in a rattle
Flush down itself -
But not before HIS bottom
Had been torn off,
The flesh stripped searing from the bone
In a bloodied mass of foam and guts
Spewed into the heart of the bowl.
The toilet sucked and sucked,
And with a screech and a squelch
He disappeared,
Sucked ’till his eye-teeth
Dropped out
And then his skull
Imploded
And then
All gone.
Who was he?
Some say he was a madman,
Verging on the edge of genius,
Too strong for the world,
This world,
Let it slip,
His reality tore into this other reality
And won.
Christ, I hope not,
For there but for the grace of God -
5/5/00
Imagine if the only thing that makes our world real is us holding it together with our minds …
Supposing that one day your imagination was so intense that you imagined yourself into a nightmare world …
By AMICOOLYET? Fri Nov 23rd 2012 at 8:20 pm
I’ve read this several and still have little to no idea what is going on. Something about a toilet and a skull, that’s all I know.
By Richard Macwilliam Sat Nov 24th 2012 at 6:05 pm
Okay, imagine that reality is only created by us. It’s a figment of our mind. Suppose someone is a bit insane and has a nightmare view of the world. At some stage they lose the plot and can no longer ‘hold it together’. Their insanity wins. Their nightmare view of the world becomes reality.
By McThosan keller Tue Jul 12th 2011 at 12:45 pm
Nice.
Though i’m scared
By shelby love Wed Apr 6th 2011 at 11:13 am
it was ok i mean a toilet it was really good but i dont know if ill ever sit on a toilet again i get scared easy
lol
By Krystal Tue Mar 29th 2011 at 1:01 pm
Evil toilet…probaly cuz it gets lots of junk
By Jane Wed Jul 28th 2010 at 3:54 pm
Oh my goodness, lol. This poem is definitely awesome. : ).
By Austin kurmas (smugdevil14) Thu May 6th 2010 at 8:25 am
sweetness i loved it!!! it just painted a horrific picture in my head
By Abby Barnes Thu Jan 28th 2010 at 3:09 pm
OMG!!Totally awesome! I love the way you have used your imagination and sucked it all up together to create this cool poem. I really love the “but sucking” thing…. If you make another one try and make it a little bit more scary.